whataboffin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alfred Gets Fixed]

I disagree with previous person

I really liked this and didnt see the ending coming so it made me laugh which is good. Liked the animation it was v good. Im just wondering where there is a hospital that performs operations on both humans and animals :P

[EgoCity Chap V disk2]

Great animation

I really liked the animation on this it was wicked. I cant stress how much I liked the animation however I did lose track of what was going on plot wise but that could just be because I havent seen the previous ones. I was going to give it 4 out of 5 cos I wasnt able to follow it but then my hairs stood up on the back of my neck and as that dont happen v often with animations I thought Id give it the full 5 and just watch the other animations too :) Good work
PS I checked your profile and it says your 17 so I hate you cos your to good for someone who is 17!!

[Say good bye]

Is alright

The animation was nice. I didnt like the deer very much the hind quarters looked odd. Dont forget to use reference material when character designing.
I can see the message means a lot to you and that is fine. How ever the lack of sound really brings it down.

[Spookyville USA]

Loved it

I loved this, the animation was great. And what is really good is that (without spoiling it) the ending was a surprise, totally unexpected.
Want to see more!

[Battalion 7 - Episode 4]

help

For some reason I can only get to the bit where he says he is going to watch Lost on DVD :( I really wanna find out what happens after that but it just dont seem to download. Got any ideas how I can get it to work?

[Star Wars Theater Ep1]

Not bad

Not bad, could have done with a bit of work. Like for instance having enough time at the begining for someone to read what it said. If your unsure about how long to put it up then why not have a button so that when the viewer has read it he can continue. Plus you might not have noticed but I think the dot of your i and the s where on the same layer or something cos they went weird when it faded out. Keep an eye on the little things and you can improve your work greatly.

[One Hammer.]

Great

I loved this and it proves that you dont need a massive file to have a great animation. I salute u!

[Humpty]

Very good

I liked this, the song worked well and the pace matched it. One thought I had though was that it would have been good that during the ahhhhhh bit in the sond just as humpty jumped off the building would be a shot of him falling in a way that the camera followed him closely and you saw the ground get closer and the building rushing by and his trousers rusling in the wind rather than just a distant shot if you know what I mean and then maybe before he hit the ground it went black cos I liked how you didnt show the smashing. But it was cool, well done

[SMB3 Outtakes]

Nastalgia oh nastalgia!

I loved this, being a big Mario fan. I thought it all worked really well and found it really funny. I cant think of anything more to say about it lol

[Halloween shorts]

wicked

Im liking your stuff! Im adding you to my favourite authors! Loved the bit where he was going rar rar rar and then the little squeeky rar